Navel gazing
Nov. 22nd, 2013 10:30 pmA discussion elsewhere (and a bit from
wrisomifu earlier) had me thinking about dialogue words and "said" synonyms. In general, I am with the "go with 'said', it's a non-word" camp on the issue. I don't go around looking for synonyms. I also tend to structure sentences as ["dialogue." Description. "more dialogue."] and variants, without necessarily using any kind of "said" word. This helps me to avoid the dreaded synonym-for-said-that-doesn't-actually-involve-talking difficulty that seems to plague some writers.
I checked a few different stories and am seeing what looks like an interesting zipf-like distribution in my dialogue word choices. The bulk of my choices are made up of one of 4 choices: either no explicit 'said' word, "said", "asked" or "answered". No 'said' word (denoted by '-') and "said" together make up well over 50% of my dialogue choices in the stories I looked at. Have a table of 5 stories:
Also I can't believe the WIP-o-Doom is nearly 40K words and has only 431 dialogue passages. It feels like way more.
Because I'm ridiculous I also did a graph of dialogue words for this story:
( under the cut )
The tails of this distribution also include "said [adverb]" phrases. Also, this is a nice way to figure out what kinds of phrases I might be over-using (not counting 'said'; it's a non-word).
I suppose I should actually try to write something tonight instead of mucking with numbers.
ETA: Nope! Another graph, I used The Hump Day Party Mix because it is the longest thing I've finished in a good long while. Graph below:
( Here! )
I checked a few different stories and am seeing what looks like an interesting zipf-like distribution in my dialogue word choices. The bulk of my choices are made up of one of 4 choices: either no explicit 'said' word, "said", "asked" or "answered". No 'said' word (denoted by '-') and "said" together make up well over 50% of my dialogue choices in the stories I looked at. Have a table of 5 stories:
Story #Dialogue "said" "-" Total
Lines
WIP-o-Doom 431 0.2041763 0.3689095 0.5730858
HumpDay Party Mix 104 0.3653846 0.3365385 0.7019231
Sage Advice 46 0.3913043 0.3695652 0.7608696
Avocado WIP 31 0.3548387 0.2903226 0.6451613
Still Life 27 0.3333333 0.3703704 0.7037037
Also I can't believe the WIP-o-Doom is nearly 40K words and has only 431 dialogue passages. It feels like way more.
Because I'm ridiculous I also did a graph of dialogue words for this story:
( under the cut )
The tails of this distribution also include "said [adverb]" phrases. Also, this is a nice way to figure out what kinds of phrases I might be over-using (not counting 'said'; it's a non-word).
I suppose I should actually try to write something tonight instead of mucking with numbers.
ETA: Nope! Another graph, I used The Hump Day Party Mix because it is the longest thing I've finished in a good long while. Graph below:
( Here! )