ha! I'm assuming that the folks knocking at the door are some kind of fictional detectives or something? that would be cool. :)
The Vashta Nerada always felt kind of secondary to me; they were the thing that was put in to scare the kids and to have a monster which seems to be a RTD requirement. So I was kind of waiting for the rest of the story to get going in part 2. There was a bit of refocusing but it didn't jar to me.
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Date: 2008-06-10 09:47 am (UTC)The Vashta Nerada always felt kind of secondary to me; they were the thing that was put in to scare the kids and to have a monster which seems to be a RTD requirement. So I was kind of waiting for the rest of the story to get going in part 2. There was a bit of refocusing but it didn't jar to me.