Clicked through to this because it was Six/Evelyn. Unable to actually read it because it's in present tense; for some reason my brain just won't process present tense fiction. As such can't really comment on it in any useful way. Cthulhu, I hope this fad for writing in present tense for "immediacy" ends soon...
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Date: 2008-02-04 05:32 pm (UTC)