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100 words, slightly twisted. Newbie here, so sorry in advance.
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Moving On
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He could've returned in no time at all, but he didn't. Even now she could never tell him, how hard it really was.

Fritz finds her at the school. "Sarah Jane, thank God! Where did you get those clothes?"

She can't stop smiling. "Hello, Doctor."

"Were you in that accident? Let's get you back..."

That night K9 fries the hospital locks and trundles to her side, tin tail wagging. Disco he may be, but it's her easiest breakout yet. And they won't be back; she's done with doctors. They hotwire the first car they find, pick a direction, and drive.


Date: 2006-05-18 11:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyvivien.livejournal.com
Oh god, that's perfect. SJS is just bitter enough and just sad enough and it's just lovely in the saddest possible way. You should write SJS fic and lots of it!

she's done with doctors.

Date: 2007-07-27 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mossymermaid.livejournal.com
Disco he may be, but he's still foxy.

Wow, this is beautiful. You convey so much with those 100 words, and you capture SJS's character.

Bravo!

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