ext_9017 ([identity profile] concorde.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] eve11 2006-02-19 04:07 pm (UTC)

Hey, fun story! You captured the rhythm of their dialogue and their speech patterns very well. Even without attributions, I knew exactly who was talking.

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